This guy really discredit dozens of (pro) remixes and delivers this? What the heck is going on? Ridiculous & inacceptable.
Well, the first 2 1/2 minutes are annoying. But from 2:30 to 4:00 it's ok. Omoroca, please take that part and create from here your next tune. That could be a good one. But for now it's just average.
Like speedy said!
Review by Grigul
what can I add, what happens, when I press THIS or THAT. Besides that, the section from 2:30 to 4:00 is good. You should take that and try to create a good tune. The first part up to 2:30 sounds like somebody who just started to learn how to play an instrument. Ergo: average tune, better than the other ones you've shared. Good middle section. Don't be too disappointed, see it as another step to a good tune.