The place for musicians to share their knowledge and ideas about music and remixing, and to post WIP snippets and feedback. Also suggest tunes for remixing, here.
It's maybe the old-sounding sounddesign which gave you the average ratings... Try to build more suitable sounds. Don't know which DAW you use. It looks like Propellerheads Reason..? If not, try out the SPIRE Vst Instrument. It's great for Lead-Sounds.