Commodore Remix

Hi,

I finished it ... It was a present for the Valentine's Day last year for my girlfriend, but I couldn't finish it earlier than to last saturday.
But she was very happy about it, because it describes our love in a musical way. She's in the same with me it sounds happy, so our relationship is happy for me in the whole.
I think the beginning sounds like spring ... green woods, green meadow, sunny weather.
Lol, but she meant at 2:53 the piano let's show a small gnome jumping happy through a wood. I think so, too.
Later she wanted a small melancholic part and a few percussions but there don't fit any melancholy in.
Ok, enough about blah blahs ... it's a very difficult song for me, because it should bring a important message to her about my opinion about our relationship. So, the melodic art was very important and I think I did good.
I think you hear, I like pianos

Now, I hope you enjoy it.

http://wavedancer.timida.de/songs/waved ... sounds.mp3

Hey Thanks for sharing a song that is so personal to both you.

Ok Here is my feedback.

I like everything...the only thing that I would maybe add is a bit of reverb or delay ...it sounds a bit dry through my headphones.

You could also possibly add a Breathy PAD Sound in there.

No problem, I asked her if I may share it. But it costs you an honest feedback


@feedback
You're right. I thought the same. I thought I could resample it with a small reverb of my SB Audigy, but when I configure the "Living room"-preset for example, it sounds normal. When I resample it with this preset, I have to turn off the preset, when I want to hear it. Stupid technical cheat but I like it
But next time I'll try it with more technical effects to "worth up" the sound. It could only take a while for years till the next project is finished

Track is clipping the whole way through mate.

Track fixed, thanks retrovertigo