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Poison (by drax)
Poison (by drax)
Last edited by Mordi on 08/05/2008 - 23:14, edited 2 times in total.
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Could anyone give me some feedback before I submit it to RKO?
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Re: Poison (by drax)
Since you gave me such a nice feedback, I thought doing the exact same thing for you.
So here we go:
Nice start, lovely synth choir
Waiting for a melody
The melody is nice, cute retro instrument
Now this is getting very retro
Even more retro, ok I'm in retro mode
Thinking this is catchy
Base might be a bit dull, though
Waiting for the tune to take off
Yeah, now alot happened here at the same time. Nice
Back to normal. I guess you could keep the energy going a little more..
Sounds a little repetitive, but still nice.
The fade out ending is ok
--- song ends
Easy listening, really gives me that retro feeling. Maybe a bit too much? Not a perfect tune as it's very simplistic, but it's good. Yellow/orange. Probably orange, but I miss some more depth I guess. Perhaps the rythm and base could need some spicing up, dunno..
So here we go:
Nice start, lovely synth choir
Waiting for a melody
The melody is nice, cute retro instrument
Now this is getting very retro
Even more retro, ok I'm in retro mode
Thinking this is catchy
Base might be a bit dull, though
Waiting for the tune to take off
Yeah, now alot happened here at the same time. Nice
Back to normal. I guess you could keep the energy going a little more..
Sounds a little repetitive, but still nice.
The fade out ending is ok
--- song ends
Easy listening, really gives me that retro feeling. Maybe a bit too much? Not a perfect tune as it's very simplistic, but it's good. Yellow/orange. Probably orange, but I miss some more depth I guess. Perhaps the rythm and base could need some spicing up, dunno..
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Re: Poison (by drax)
Another nice sounding remix which is nicely mastered....
If you break up the track a little in the middle and then come back in with drum fills it would give a bit of variety to the track..
Also try and end the track with drum outro instead of long fade... I.E drum breakdown, toms etc and then add abit of delay and echo to give it a nice feel
Good work Keep it up
If you break up the track a little in the middle and then come back in with drum fills it would give a bit of variety to the track..
Also try and end the track with drum outro instead of long fade... I.E drum breakdown, toms etc and then add abit of delay and echo to give it a nice feel
Good work Keep it up