Song!!

[o2]

Just wondering what people think of this little idea:

http://o2.ziphoid.com/mp3/o2-intro.mp3

Is it something i should continue on or not?

I know volume and EQ dont sound so good... Made it with my headphones on, also, i havent spent any time with drumprogramming either..

Cheers
o2

[Vosla]

(...) i havent spent any time with drumprogramming either..

Well, that was exactly what I missed here. A crunchy drum after 20 secs or so to give the otherwise "tame" piece a drive. And maybe a another kind of guitar from that point on. Dunno but that will likely warp the original laid back song into something different, maybe a bit too hectic?

I'm off now and leave this to somebody who has more profound knowledge of music than me (eg. everybody else )

[Analog-X64]

What is this intro to? Sounds great.